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Thalassophobia
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 25th August 2013 @ 06:52:27 AM in AEST
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a message clear,
and meant for me:
don’t mess around with the sea
the sand is menacing as well,
keep away from the swell!
stop wondering how it behaves,
or you might encounter “errant” waves…
get the drift? do you sa-vee?
you’ve far too much curiosity
act like a seal and leave,
the tide gives you this one reprieve
drop the shells, don’t stop to pee,
leave things as they’re meant to be
salt water is your enemy:
don’t muck about with the sea.
Copyright ©
spike
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2013-08-25 06:52:27]
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Re: Thalassophobia
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th August 2013 @ 06:53:42 PM AEST
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I have the deepest respect for all that water.
Good work.
Blessings,
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Re: Thalassophobia
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by spud on
Monday, 21st October 2013 @ 08:18:03 AM AEST
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10 years in the RN, and given your chosen
title for this little gem, I just had to give it
a once over.
And now that I've read it ....... Geez, ''hands
to bathe'' in the middle of the Indian Ocean
could have been my worst nightmare!
Well crafted as usual, Spikers.
Spud
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Re: Thalassophobia
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 18th July 2014 @ 09:13:54 PM AEST
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love the picture lol, this is really just so fabulous, i think
each line as its read draws me in more, and the ending
brilliant, a beautifully penned piece,
hugs n' love nessa
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