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A beginning
Contributed by
mickytwo1984
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Saturday, 24th August 2013 @ 10:25:57 AM in AEST
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Let them fly and pierce the hearts of men, without killing them
Strike them down in spirit and take from them not their lives
But that which they hold above the lives of themselves and other men
Till all that is dear is among the ash
Till they see their privilege as it was, as this is the only way they will see it
Let them fly that men may run until the day they've done their dash
That they might sink below the dregs and see no man is measured
All are equal among the living and the dead
Till all are one, till all are none, weak and humbled are the pleasured
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Re: A beginning
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th August 2013 @ 03:50:00 AM AEST
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A beginning, is not like one would call a fresh start in an ordinary query in an ordinary life. I like this. It's on target, just the man or women we're looking for, could mean to be a new start, or a personal turning point. But somehow that will never work with what you may someday might become.
"Till all are one, till all are none, weak and humbled are pleasured" A cross fire hurricane, of sorts, a change may come with what may sinks in - some call this art, reflection, truth.
I say, old boy, this is a good poem. Exactly sort of right!
Cheers, and of course, Peace!
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Re: A beginning
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 03:11:10 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, an inspired write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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