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I, The Sufferer
Contributed by
lucid_tides
on
Wednesday, 21st August 2013 @ 08:15:37 PM in AEST
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toughstuff
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- I, The Sufferer -
How far will i bend
before i finally break?
I've been waiting for the day
When i dream and never wake.
It's a sad thought,
because life is a gift.
But I've been dealt a hand
That i no longer wish to lift.
How far will i stretch
before the fibers tear?
I've been pulled apart,
Stabbed in the heart,
Trapped in my thoughts, ensnared.
And if i make a mistake
It wouldn't be the first
Betwixt these thoughts,
These treacherous woes,
I finally quench my thirst.
My thirst to end the suffering.
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Re: I, The Sufferer
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by MarkMark on
Wednesday, 21st August 2013 @ 10:21:32 PM AEST
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| Deep poem. You have done a nice job writing this . Life can be a bad deal ,no doubt about it and suffering is all we have been guaranteed along with death. Anything other than these is a blessing from God. All good things come from God. Nice poem. |
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Re: I, The Sufferer
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 22nd August 2013 @ 11:55:19 AM AEST
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Loved the line
"But I've been dealt a hand
That I no longer wish to lift"
You've reminded me here that some people just breeze through life, while others tread a rocky road.
Steve |
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