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Burial ground
Contributed by
Sommer
on
Monday, 19th August 2013 @ 12:05:55 AM in AEST
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The pain it never goes away
My body weighted down
I'm sinking to the bottom
Watch me as I drown
My vision's slowly fading out
Muffled is every sound
But it's okay I won't be missed
Who cares I'm not around?
I drift into some sort of dream
My happiness is found
When I close my eyes it's you I see
It's all over now
At least in death I feel alive
With you my heart still pounds
You are the only reason for
My watery burial ground
Copyright ©
Sommer
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2013-08-19 00:05:55]
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Re: Burial ground
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 19th August 2013 @ 05:21:32 PM AEST
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Sorry you feel this way. Sometimes life doesn't seem to have a purpose but often it takes other people to help you see things more clearly
Good luck
Steve |
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Re: Burial ground
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by MarkMark on
Wednesday, 21st August 2013 @ 11:09:24 PM AEST
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| Pretty dark. I'm not so sure death will be a happy place for everyone. Life is a ***** no doubt about it but it is never as bad as we think it is. Good poem. |
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Re: Burial ground
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 06:16:44 PM AEST
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excellent poem, sorry you are so sad,
hugs n' love nessa |
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