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Black Rose
Contributed by
Shipwreck
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Saturday, 17th August 2013 @ 09:50:41 PM in AEST
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I dreamt I held the rose,
The rose of one lifetime.
where children play
with shadowed mimes
I dreamt the rose was given me,
by faceless silhouette's,
out from a place of hatred
from the throne,
where Satan sets.
And I could see shadows
calling on my name
promising a world of lust
a world of instant fame.
and all got deathly quiet,
and I heard my name chose,
and I could see my lifeless temple
Holding a black rose
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2013-08-17 21:50:41]
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Re: Black Rose
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th August 2013 @ 11:12:17 PM AEST
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Wow, quite symbolic, most especially for a young person to write. You must of known the black rose didn't exist in real life. Death, or decay of human bone, skin, or a once living animal is what it symbolizes. The black plant life that lives in the form of a tree bark, or a Prunus serotina (black cherry), the Padus, Characterized by having deciduous leaves. Where deciduous means falling off at maturity.
You make me think a lot here. Writings from a young person are extremely memorable indeed.
Well done!
Peace!
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Re: Black Rose
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 25th August 2013 @ 05:20:37 PM AEST
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| Emotions and imagination are so strong in teenage and this is a great poem to reflect that. Strong vivid imagery and a mixing pot of emotions so easily accessed by teen years with an overall openness not yet closed by cynicism. |
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Re: Black Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th April 2014 @ 09:01:35 PM AEST
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| wicked good! hugs n' love nessa |
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