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Helpless
Contributed by
MarkMark
on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 03:27:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So tender a flower, as the wind
blows against her.
The darkness of this world pulls
her down as she cries.
I stand here so helpless, while this
day leaves me empty.
As life fades away, and death closes
her eyes.
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MarkMark
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2013-08-16 15:27:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Helpless
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 04:41:49 PM AEST (User
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I like the way you kept his short, like someone's last breath,
Nice work.
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