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Back through the Pain
Contributed by
ScribereHabeo
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Thursday, 15th August 2013 @ 07:34:32 PM in AEST
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I remember when we were friends
That was the best thing in my life
Now what should I do, that depends
I don't wanna suffer anymore strife
I am lost without you laughing with me
Cold and alone with no where to turn
I don't know what you want me to be
If you want me to be happy, or crash and burn
You avoided me and made me out to be a pest
I thought you were my friend
My buddy, better than the rest
Now all I see is the truth that you bend
I see that you decided I'm no longer worth your time
Not worthy of your actions, or happiness
Not even worth of a rhyme
Not a word of how I have lost all worthiness
I am abandoned by your light
I am too tired of you to even insult you
I am too tired of you to even fight
I am so tired I no longer know what to do
You will never hear this even if I wish you could
You will never know how I feel
I know you can't hear me, that wouldn't do me any good
You trample my feelings, like they are invisible
Like they were never real......
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Re: Back through the Pain
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 05:15:01 PM AEST
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Loved the line
"You trample my feelings, like they are invisible".
I can feel your frustration in this, as if the whole world is on your shoulders.
Nice write and welcome back
Steve |
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Re: Back through the Pain
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by MarkMark on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 08:15:06 PM AEST
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| Yes ,I can relate. I don't know why this kind of pain and disappointment is the best stimulus for writing good poems. How do happy people write poems? Who knows but they don't have the same power and reality that sorrow brings .At least I believe this. I like your style and don't kid yourself you have enough energy to go and kick the crap out of who ever they are cheating on you with. You owe it to yourself to try . It makes me feel better. Good job on the poem . and remember you are not alone when ever this happens .Well you probably will be but there is someone else going through the same thing some where. If you cheat first then they will be the jealous ones who hurt even if they don't love you. It is our crazy human nature to want what we can't have and try not to be a nice guy all the time. If you want to get laid hang out with a nice guy and you can do his girlfriend if he has one. Their girl friends always cheat .Jerks seem to have to most loyal girlfriends . It is nuts but take a look at it. This is only my opinion I am not trying to be rude .I have these problems too every so often. Take it easy. |
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