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Do you know
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Monday, 12th August 2013 @ 06:58:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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(Do you know?)
if god appeared in front of you
would you have anything to say
about the way you treated others
when they got in your way
could you explain to him the reasoning
right from the very start
why you seem to be so happy
when you take someones world apart
you think you know the answer
but the truth will prevail
he can see past the myth
in the words you call your tale
in the eye's of our beholder
we will all look one day
he see's the words unspoken
so what will you say
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA(thehotshotpoet)
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2013-08-12 06:58:33]
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Re: Do you know
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 05:20:43 PM AEST
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Gritty and thought provoking.
I'm probably the sort of person that would see God and ask him how Elvis is, but I think I'm digressing a little.
Nice work.
Steve |
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Re: Do you know
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by thehotshotpoet on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 07:43:36 PM AEST
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| no steve.you are not alone at all my friend,we all know this,for years they said elvis was still alive, hiding somewhere but here is the facts,,the day his daughter married micheal jackson,if elvis was in hiding he would have come out on that day i have no doubt |
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Re: Do you know
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by desire on
Saturday, 21st September 2013 @ 02:20:33 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem, I am a huge fan of yours . your work
Always gives us something to ponder.. kudos thanks for sharing |
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