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Stones and magpies
Contributed by
spiritbody
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Saturday, 10th August 2013 @ 04:05:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As I walked through the churchyard
The Dead stood proudly at their graves
But before I could reach them
Time took them
and left all but stones and magpies
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2013-08-10 16:05:19]
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Re: Stones and magpies
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by northernlights on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 03:16:06 AM AEST
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| My instant reaction was,'I like this. Quirky and whimsical with an effective message great combination for poetry. |
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Re: Stones and magpies
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 05:24:48 PM AEST
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I have to say, it does conjure up the image of an empty churchyard on a cold Winter morning, watching your own breath plume into the air as you walk silently along.
Reminds me of when my father and I go to lay wreaths on our relatives graves at Christmas.
Steve |
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Re: Stones and magpies
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 06:34:16 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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