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Damn Letter
Contributed by
hopelezz
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Saturday, 10th August 2013 @ 05:43:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Wake up everyday,
eventhough your not around.
Saying all the words that I can say..
Imagining your here with me safe and sound.
Hearing you whisper, deeply in my ears.
Whispered "I love You" for a thousand years..
Keep my feet forward, just to make you mine.
Eventhought I'm torn apart, still striving in every line.
In this world where we apart,
You will always be here inside of my heart,
Eventhough I'm just a shadow who follows you.
Keeping you above.. Is all I can do..
Through the hard times that I fight,
through the sacrifices that I made..
I will always here, just only to be your light
Because your my only strength that will never fade.
tears.. falls....
Copyright ©
hopelezz
... [
2013-08-10 05:43:49]
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Re: Damn Letter
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by MickyTwo1984 on
Saturday, 10th August 2013 @ 10:30:46 AM AEST
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| Nice. tyfs. |
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Re: Damn Letter
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by ArloDisarray on
Saturday, 10th August 2013 @ 02:56:48 PM AEST
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| This is a well-worded story, that i think we've all had to tell at one time in our lives, or more. You've really captured the fear, and joys of love. It's hard sometimes to put these feelings into words. You've done a beautiful job. Much love. Keep on striving. |
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Re: Damn Letter
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by CharM on
Sunday, 11th August 2013 @ 04:50:23 PM AEST
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well done on this one.... =)
[you may need to check a couple typos though] |
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