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Silent Sighs
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Tuesday, 6th August 2013 @ 06:39:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Leaves are falling,
Shadows are calling,
Ashes of burned lies,
A black sunrise,
As you're choking,
They're always joking,
Laughing at your cries,
Right before your eyes,
The pain it's feeding,
The darkness is bleeding,
Screams of silent sighs,
As the world around you dies.
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lonelywolf04
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2013-08-06 06:39:50]
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Re: Silent Sighs
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 6th August 2013 @ 03:20:19 PM AEST
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| You tell a story of intense anguish and lead the reader through the valley. I felt it, saw it and heard what your words had to say. I liked this very much. Your imagery is intense and on the mark. Great write, P |
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Re: Silent Sighs
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by CharM on
Sunday, 11th August 2013 @ 04:52:48 PM AEST
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WOW.... [Yikes]...
Very well written! |
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