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Freezer Burn
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Saturday, 3rd August 2013 @ 05:17:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Tied to yesterday
Everything must come to an end
Dreams of beauty
Shadow dancing in my head
Coming together
Squeeze the passion from the night
Intoxicated from the memory
I can fell you grab me tight
Stay unsteady
Your body moves
My hands out of sight
Home is where the heart is
Rest and be peaceful in the quite
My mouth moves but does no talking
Thinking of you
Doing more than your portion
But doing it right
In dangerous waters
Flapping wildly to stay afloat
Gasping for air
As your juice clogs my throat
Clouds part ways
Sunshine radiates on my face
I stare towards the heavens
Asking stupid questions has become commonplace
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2013-08-03 17:17:02]
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Re: Freezer Burn
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd August 2013 @ 11:14:44 PM AEST
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we want to hold onto something good for a long time. But, even in the freezer, say even in liquid nitrogen, stuff gets maybe gets stale. I guess time changes us and them they say. Not really though.
Intransigence starts with the soul, and possibly if we're lucky never departs. Poetry my friend.
To yours!
Peace! |
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Re: Freezer Burn
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by AngelFox on
Sunday, 4th August 2013 @ 04:31:29 AM AEST
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| Great write . Strong versus just flowed mercifully with the same core message of love and anticipation. |
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