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Nothing Wrong with a Man Crying
Contributed by
Survivor
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Saturday, 3rd August 2013 @ 07:55:30 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Society says that the tears of a man shows weakness.
That the warrior can no longer fight with honor.
The man lost his ability to use aggressiveness with his sword.
Sorrow from lost love is a justified defense.
Agony caused by the torturing whip breaks the man.
Endurance for battling built up anguish eventually drains stamina,
A war which all men lose to humanity by showing vulnerability.
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Survivor
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2013-08-03 07:55:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Nothing Wrong with a Man Crying
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ensis718 on
Saturday, 3rd August 2013 @ 12:57:46 PM AEST (User
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Since I saw no comments about this, I figured I'd say it myself: this was quite a beautiful poem. I appreciate the simpleness of it while it also expresses what you really want to say. |
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Re: Nothing Wrong with a Man Crying
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 04:50:03 PM AEST (User
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i've never been one to mistake kindness as
weakness, excellent write, makes one think,
hugs n' love nessa |
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