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Warm
Contributed by
desciple
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Wednesday, 31st July 2013 @ 11:20:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The mutual struggle for truth,
As we rip pages from the book of ruth.
Confused...all we had to do is look.
Questions were hidden,
Answers etched in our hearts,
The fuzzy feeling of the nucleus accumbens.
Cautious, fearful not to impend.
Careful as it sends...dopamine filled with serotonin, invading all my brain.
Words begin to form a quatrain,
Highly intoxicated,
I just can't explain...
The fragrance, the aroma, the scent.
That lingers when you leave.
It always gives me hope...filling my temporal lobe.
Blinded ecstasy,
Deep thoughts of holding you endlessly...
If mass times velocity equals energy.
Then the force that created this emotion...must of created this undying devotion.
Copyright ©
desciple
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2013-07-31 11:20:23]
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Re: Warm
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by femyed on
Wednesday, 31st July 2013 @ 01:51:34 PM AEST
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| Words from a science-based mind. Flows so sweet it got me wings I soar in the waves of emotions. Lyrically stable, well-structured, expressions. Such a lovely piece it is. |
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Re: Warm
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st August 2013 @ 01:02:28 AM AEST
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Incredible write.
the book of Ruth is most definitely a masterpiece as this write is.
Blessings,
emy. |
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Re: Warm
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by CharM on
Thursday, 8th August 2013 @ 06:58:28 PM AEST
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| wow nicely put together.... |
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