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The Merry-Go-Round of Life
Contributed by
Survivor
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Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 10:17:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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The artificial horse is on the track of repetition.
While sitting on this boring ride,
Precious moments are being wasted with each spin.
The carousel ignites sparks in the brain,
Ready to explode with the fuel of impatience.
In order to get off the wheel of boredom,
Humans must take a stand and stop going in circles.
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Survivor
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2013-07-28 10:17:56]
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Re: The Merry-Go-Round of Life
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by Archie on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 02:17:27 PM AEST
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This is pretty good. I am reminded of some words from one of my favorite songs.
". . .Continuous mistakes I've known I made before. How long will I feel so out of place?"
Excerpt from "Troubles" by Alicia Keys" |
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Re: The Merry-Go-Round of Life
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 02:59:12 PM AEST
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Very good write.
Blessings,
emy |
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