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Freudian Slip.
Contributed by
mickytwo1984
on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 09:59:39 AM in AEST
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Should you choose to walk beside me I would stand by you forever
If only there were a place in your heart to accept me as I am
Instead you would wish that I were someone else
Someone else to be as much like me as they can
I could cut you ribbons with only a single sentence
As a sentence
Judgement justice scornful and unrepentant
Your darkest secrets are mine to keep
I know what holds you what keeps you what you cherish
Were I a weaker man I would watch you weep
Crumble scream as you hear me speak reveal your strength
You are nothing...weak
Broken hearted broken mind no love inside lost with your mind
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mickytwo1984
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2013-07-28 09:59:39]
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Re: Freudian Slip.
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by Archie on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 02:23:09 PM AEST
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| This is very good as a poem but, I would not want these words spoken to me. This is written from a deep place of emotion. I like the style of this poem. |
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Re: Freudian Slip.
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 29th July 2013 @ 01:01:39 AM AEST
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"I could cut you ribbons with only a single sentence "
an interesting line. it captured my imagination. well done. |
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Re: Freudian Slip.
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by Banjosandwitch on
Thursday, 1st August 2013 @ 06:49:37 AM AEST
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| like it |
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