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Daybreak
Contributed by
shoedmj
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Saturday, 27th July 2013 @ 02:06:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Early morning sunlight shining
Bouncing off of bladed crystal
Evening stars are slowly fading
Ushering the beading dew
Playful fawns bound through the valley
Crickets chirp turns to dismissal
Daylight dreamers resting sadly
Missing beauty's early view
Golden rays begin to brighten
Chasing mists that float so wistful
Sunlight rises o'er horizon
Shades of orange and amber hue
Tree limbs sway and cast their shadows
Shading havens in the thistle
Vibrant bird songs 'cross the meadow
Dawn is breaking once anew
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2013-07-27 02:06:33]
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Re: Daybreak
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 03:19:45 AM AEST
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I like this, but most can't see past this non-newtonian liquid of life. For them life passes through a bottle-neck like ketchup.
The horizon is not ever-present, the past is solid waste, the future, yet again a colloidal mixture of uncertainty, like milk, if you will.
Thanks for a great poem.
Peace!
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Re: Daybreak
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 04:19:10 AM AEST
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Lovely imagery threaded through this piece, I really enjoyed reading it from start to finish.
It also reminded me that I should really try to get up early some days. I'm more of a night person but after reading this I feel like I'm missing out on so much!!
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