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Torn
Contributed by
Kirby
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Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Torn between day and night.
I can't choose which one is right.
The day shines warmth and beauty,
The night shines passion and strength.
In the day, it shows me adrenaline and excitement.
In the night, it shows me rythym and fun.
Soon my time will be up to decide.
Let's just oray my heart sides with my mind.
I can't be torn anymore.
Day or night.
I must choose which one is right.
(And right now I have. Night has taken over because the sun has finally set on the day and the love I thought that we shared. Goodbye my sweet day. Your sun will no longer shine on my life. You have moved on and so have I. "Parting is such sweet sorrow")
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Kirby
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2003-05-16 13:35:00]
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Re: Torn
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by TheeCductress on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 10:10:20 PM AEST
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| You have a wonderful way with words. Sorry things didn't work out for you. Never the less the poem was wonderful. Alicia |
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Re: Torn
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by WordPoet on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 12:53:33 AM AEST
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Each may be special in their own way but the one that truly moves you is the one you should choose.
Take care, great write. |
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Re: Torn
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by vincy on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 05:43:35 AM AEST
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playful, that's how I arrive to realizations.
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