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Pulse
Contributed by
Ambivalence
on
Friday, 26th July 2013 @ 12:24:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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No matter how much
you feel down deep in the dumps,
your hurt heart still pumps.
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Ambivalence
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2013-07-26 00:24:13]
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Re: Pulse
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by Survivor on
Friday, 26th July 2013 @ 05:09:48 PM AEST
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| There is another name for this poem, which is the exact same format as haiku. Haiku poems were created in Japan. They are poems of nature. That being said, a very creative 5-7-5 count in which you were able to produce rhymes. I read many poems in my life, and I never saw anybody accomplish this in a 5-7-5 poem. I think the piece is great, and welcome back to writing! |
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Re: Pulse
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 03:40:33 PM AEST
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Keep it up.
This is great.
Smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Pulse
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 01:39:10 AM AEST
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excellent haiku, beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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