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No, no, no
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
on
Thursday, 25th July 2013 @ 08:23:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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No you said
When I asked if you still loved me
No you laughed
When I if you’d been true
No you whispered
When you saw that I had lost it
No you screamed
When I turned the gun on you
Copyright ©
mrpeanut64
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2013-07-25 20:23:51]
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Re: No, no, no
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on
Friday, 26th July 2013 @ 12:28:18 AM AEST
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Wow... what a turn at the end there. I like this (assuming it's merely poetry!). Great write
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Re: No, no, no
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by Spike on
Friday, 26th July 2013 @ 11:58:39 PM AEST
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Dark, indeed, and a nicely arranged descending iteration on the negative.
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Re: No, no, no
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by thistle_and_fern on
Friday, 13th December 2013 @ 03:33:14 AM AEST
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Short but right to the point
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Re: No, no, no
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by blknwht on
Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 08:31:54 AM AEST
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| Wow... Big things come in small packages... i think you got your point across well. Short and Sweet Great Write |
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