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SUMMER NIGHTS
Contributed by
renee
on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I FEEL THE SUMMER BREEZE
ITS BLOWING IN MY HAIR
I FEEL YOUR GENTLE TOUCH
EVEN THOUGH YOUR NOT THERE
I CAN HEAR YOUR HEART BEAT
ITS POUNDING IN YOUR CHEST
I CAN EVEN HEAR YOU BREATH
IT SEEMS SO REAL TO ME
I SIT IN THE BACK YARD
IN THE SUMMER NIGHT
AND WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES
YOUR ARMS ARE AROUND ME
OH SO TIGHT.
YOU TELL ME THAT YOU LOVE ME
AND THAT YOU ALWAYS WILL
YOU WILL NEVER GO AWAY
AND THIS IT SEEMS SO REAL
BUT THEN I OPEN MY EYES
AND YOUR NOT REALLY THERE
BUT JUST FOR A MOMENT IT WAS A
BEAUTIFUL SUMMER NIGHT
AND WONDERFUL SUMMER AIR.
RENEE
Copyright ©
renee
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2003-05-16 13:05:00]
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Re: SUMMER NIGHTS
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by Sexygirl on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 01:16:00 PM AEST
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| Oh the summer....my fav....you have written this so well..... |
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Re: SUMMER NIGHTS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 06:12:11 PM AEST
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| Great poem! I feel the same way about a friend of mine. I like your poem very much! |
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Re: SUMMER NIGHTS
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 07:28:16 PM AEST
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Oh Renee..this is absolutely beautiful....
I know the feeling all too well..
Jenni |
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Re: SUMMER NIGHTS
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by WordPoet on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 01:53:20 AM AEST
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A wish for us all, a dream to come true, there's a love that I wish for, no other will do.
This poem reminds me a lot of my one "When I Woke Up". If you ever read that you know how much and how easily I can relate to this poem of yours.
Ecellent write. |
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Re: SUMMER NIGHTS
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 08:40:22 AM AEST
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| Renee Those summer romances how warm & gentle they are! Christina |
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