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Because of Desperation
Contributed by
Survivor
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Wednesday, 24th July 2013 @ 08:38:56 AM in AEST
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The agony from life can cause excruciating pain.
Tears of fragility weep as strength is totally depleted.
Lacking coping abilities results to surrendering the soul to mercy.
Attempting to climb over the barriers known as misery.
Finally reaching the destination to normal survival.
Copyright ©
Survivor
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2013-07-24 08:38:56]
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Re: Because of Desperation
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by mvvenkataraman on
Wednesday, 24th July 2013 @ 09:19:03 AM AEST
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This brief poem is wonderfully penned
It is telling the truth, nothing but the truth
Reading it makes me recollect the past
Every word is hitting me hard usefully
And I am thankful to the poet for this one.
mvvenkataraman
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Re: Because of Desperation
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th July 2013 @ 04:48:30 PM AEST
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| Pain is not an uncommon thing but, reaching the goal beyond it is very satisfying. I like that the pain does not last in your poem. |
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Re: Because of Desperation
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by thezenmonkey on
Thursday, 25th July 2013 @ 07:04:55 AM AEST
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| beautiful. |
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