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It’s you
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
on
Wednesday, 24th July 2013 @ 06:40:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It’s you
Sweet and innocent you are
You shine like a star
Your love is what I seek
Every day, every week
I feel so free when we are one
Apart I think I can’t go on
A picture of you is in my pocket
A picture of me is in your locket
Sweet and beautiful, kind and true
No one on earth is as radiant as you
It’s you that makes it worth while
It’s you that brings a smile
It’s you that holds the key
It’s you that raptures me
It’s you that is so mind warping
It’s you I can’t stop talking about, it’s you
By banjosandwitch (found work) 24/07/2013
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banjosandwitch
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2013-07-24 06:40:33]
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Re: It’s you
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 24th July 2013 @ 02:09:08 PM AEST
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A sweet story of ones love for another. Nice
Greetings
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Re: It’s you
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th July 2013 @ 05:30:15 PM AEST
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| This is pretty cool. It reads almost like a song and it seems to be about a pure innocent type of love. The kind that lasts forever. |
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Re: It’s you
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 04:49:39 AM AEST
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Nice work, someone is clearly totally in love!!
Not a bad thing, with all the hate and fighting going on in the world!!
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