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When Everything Else Has Failed
Contributed by
Survivor
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Sunday, 14th July 2013 @ 09:56:41 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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When everything else has failed,
Hope goes completely down the drain.
You drown in your own misery—
Letting the currents pull your body further into the ocean.
Right before you drown to death,
You realize the value of a precious life,
So you swim back to the beach,
And keep living another day—fighting for a solution.
Copyright ©
Survivor
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2013-07-14 21:56:41]
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Re: When Everything Else Has Failed
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by dvtpdw on
Monday, 15th July 2013 @ 02:47:21 PM AEST
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| Like the way you take the reader to the edge, and at the last moment, pull him back. Very awesome write. You give hope. P |
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Re: When Everything Else Has Failed
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by Waynster on
Wednesday, 17th July 2013 @ 10:07:56 AM AEST
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You know, you have really strong words what you write and what seems like a heck of a conviction in life to write about. You have so much potential with writing, so find your direction and direct the meaning of your words to flow in an even pattern and you will be surprised the audience you will have!
Wayne
Author of: Poetic visions from My Soul
www.poeticvisions-1.biglaunch.net |
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