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If i’m not here anymore

Contributed by JonasS on Wednesday, 10th July 2013 @ 03:00:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I was sitting, thinking
What about when I pass away
Would anyone be there
At my funeral day
Would the day be as sunny
Or would it turn grey
Would it feel different
Or would it feel the same

When i’m not here anymore
Would you wait by the door
Just to hope i’d come home
And would you be there alone
Would anybody cry
The day that i die
Would anybody care
If I weren’t there

As i was sitting there crying
There acurred another tought
Would people be praising
Or screaming at the lord
Would the days feel longer
Or feel just as short
I can’t bear all this pain
That the doubt has brought

When i’m not here anymore
Would you wait by the door
Just to hope i’d come home
And would you be there alone
Would anybody cry
The day that i die
Would anybody care
If I weren’t there

So please god
Answer me
And also why
Aren’t life easy

When i’m not here anymore
Would you wait by the door
Just to hope i’d come home
And would you be there alone
Would anybody cry
The day that i die
Would anybody care
If I weren’t there




Copyright © JonasS ... [ 2013-07-10 15:00:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: If i’m not here anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 11th July 2013 @ 04:08:17 AM AEST
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They probably wouldn't be thinking any thing because they'll be devastated at the loss and your death.
Great writing. It's sad but beautifully written.
Blessings,
emy


Re: If i’m not here anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Thursday, 11th July 2013 @ 05:14:06 AM AEST
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Makes one think of what is irrelevant. Once we are gone we are in a place where the world and its things are of no concern. Non the less very good write reads easy and flows well.

Greetings
Rus


Re: If i’m not here anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Helenesovig on Thursday, 11th July 2013 @ 01:49:56 PM AEST
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Excellent I feel so proud!! Oh my God even better than I remembered and written by a 14 year old boy Id like to ad!! You are so cool.

Seje dreng!!



Re: If i’m not here anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by mick on Thursday, 11th July 2013 @ 11:32:26 PM AEST
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Beautifully written.


Re: If i’m not here anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Sommer on Friday, 12th July 2013 @ 03:52:26 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful and I was actually considering writing a piece similar to this. Great work.




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