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A tear for life
Contributed by
Helenesovig
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Wednesday, 3rd July 2013 @ 10:52:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A tear for love,
A tear for pain,
A tear for war,
A tear for blame,
A tear for you,
A tear for me.
A tear for what might never be
Copyright ©
Helenesovig
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2013-07-03 10:52:21]
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Re: A tear for life
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by stevenfloyd on
Wednesday, 3rd July 2013 @ 11:05:16 AM AEST
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| I really love this, and here is a tear because i was not the one to write this. very well done |
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Re: A tear for life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th July 2013 @ 01:10:52 AM AEST
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Short, simple, bittersweet, and great!
Thank you, I enjoyed this. |
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Re: A tear for life
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by Spike on
Thursday, 4th July 2013 @ 06:36:10 PM AEST
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Nicely arranged.
Simple wording and a lilting cadence for such a universal expression of so many emotions. Our eyes sure leak for lots of reasons, and the wells of emotion, like poetic expression, never seem to (completely) dry.
S. |
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