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Is It Wrong?
Contributed by
CharM
on
Tuesday, 2nd July 2013 @ 08:51:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Is it wrong to hide so much pain?
Is it wrong to feel slightly insane?
Is it wrong to do so much deeds?
Is it wrong to expect little needs?
Is it wrong to work hard but move slowly?
Is it wrong to be happy, but not for me?
Is it wrong to feel depress deep within?
Is it wrong to say more you can imagine?
Is it wrong to weep night and day?
Is it wrong to this pain to fade away?
Is it wrong to think better off dead?
Is it wrong to have so much pain in my head?
If it is not so wrong...
Then why am I feeling weak, not strong?
Why do my days seem so long?
When will this feeling be gone???
Copyright ©
CharM
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2013-07-02 20:51:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Is It Wrong?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Survivor on
Wednesday, 17th July 2013 @ 05:18:57 PM AEST (User
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This poem is not only well-writen, but I was touched because it hit a nerve as well. repetition is great for this poem, which is something that I avoid in my poems. the rhymes and rhyme beat were good. the message was the best. I don't know if you feel like this, or just trying to write a topic of pain for fun, but pain can be expunged. |
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