|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Picnic
Contributed by
pooper
on
Monday, 1st July 2013 @ 10:49:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
|
Our whole family went to a picnic
Did not much enjoy the fare
There were lots of sweets and pickles
Even fruit like peach and pear
Choice sandwiches and salads
One couldn't wish for more
But sprays will spoil an outing
And our dining joys impair
When nasty ant repellent
foul and despoil the air
We ants deplore such tactic
When those human things are there.
[]D oo []D er
Copyright ©
pooper
... [
2013-07-01 10:49:01]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Picnic
(User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 1st July 2013 @ 03:41:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Sweet good write
Greetings
Rus |
|
|
Re: Picnic
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nailgrass on
Monday, 1st July 2013 @ 11:28:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| nice one. i got a laugh at the poor ants expense |
|
|
Re: Picnic
(User Rating: 1 )
by maynichole on
Saturday, 6th July 2013 @ 07:19:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I love the twist. I had to go back and reread it from an ants perspective. Awesome |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
