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Contributed by
scentless_flower
on
Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 07:11:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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A shattered memory amidst a dream.
That's what you said,that's what i know.
So i leaned in your eyes to kiss,
and flick through the past as arrayed in your mind.
A saturated flourished meadow,
that light forsook and darkness reigned.
Flowers of death and trees of sin,
excuses dancing and lies running free.
A sky,that night now stole,
a sky she hid in the bays of Erebus.
What a gash that is felt,
devoid of the moon and ripped of the sun.
My hand arose to meet my lips,
to wipe the sorrow bleeding through.
I wanted to tell you,i wanted you to know
but my words barb inside me,my lips can not part.
My body weak,my sight darkened,
to my knees i crumble and lower my head.
A tear escapes my misty eyes,
heavily trickles and to the ground it thuds.
"What is this ruckus?What is this sound?"
Lightning-shaped cracks appear beneath.
"Could salvation emerge,from the well of this dream?"
Your grip,firm,it drags me down.
"All this world my love,is in your mind".
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2013-06-28 19:11:43]
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Re: You
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by duff on
Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 08:34:56 PM AEST
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| When I read this I imagine a world decorated in beauty and torn to pieces by ache. It doesn't take long to feel the acres of emotion you've packed into a well delivered piece of writing. Again, the lines carry you into this world of raw heartache. Great job. Visually moving. |
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Re: You
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 10:38:12 PM AEST
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Very sad but u r a great writer.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: You
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by karu on
Saturday, 29th June 2013 @ 05:50:52 AM AEST
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| superb writing |
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th June 2013 @ 04:00:43 PM AEST
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| This r4eally drew me in! I like your write, very trippy! |
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