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A whisper until the end
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 09:23:11 AM in AEST
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You have always been my secret, she said
A whisper until the end
You are the words I cannot find, I said
A pause at the gates of time
You are a tragedy
A star that cannot shine
You are my wing, I said
A feather to fly
I am your nothing, she said
We are out of time
You are an old story
A book with no end
You have always been my secret, she said
A poem that cannot be read
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2013-06-28 09:23:11]
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Re: A whisper until the end
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 02:30:45 PM AEST
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Sad very sad. Good write.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: A whisper until the end
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 11:43:31 PM AEST
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I agree it's very sad but it's beautifully written.
Way to go Abe.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: A whisper until the end
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by scentless_flower on
Tuesday, 2nd July 2013 @ 06:02:16 AM AEST
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| beautiful, great work. :) |
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