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Falling Petals
Contributed by
Jessica_Saini
on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Each falling petal a drop of
hope that can no longer stay afloat
in worlds of worry and desire
sinking into the manmade fire.
One petal lost and not one gained
in these strange worlds without much change
where people rush to be the best
and disappointed in the rest.
Other flowers bloom and grow. Of
their demise they do not know and
care they not how petals spent when
it comes time to pay the rent.
In the end all things are dust, the
fires ash that once were lust. Petals
soft are soft no more, remnants of
hopes no longer hoped anymore.
Copyright ©
Jessica_Saini
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2003-05-16 04:35:00]
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Re: Falling Petals
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 06:06:26 AM AEST
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Great poem. It is interesting how you have laid it out on the page. Not how I would have chosen but it works!
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Re: Falling Petals
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by venkat on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 06:40:11 AM AEST
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| Its thoughtful..and.. lovely. venkat |
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Re: Falling Petals
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 11:23:08 PM AEST
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| truely enjoyed your lovely poem:) and also i think highly of how you laid it out, with your words softly flowing, like gentle petals:) |
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