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Freedom From Clutter
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 02:14:18 PM in AEST
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Never understood your ability to ignore
Never comprehended your head in the sand
Don't know why I want to believe anymore
My eyes have awaken my heart for the end
You talk but the words are twisted around
You hear with blinders blocking each side
You smile but evil intent screams its sound
Now truth and your world finally collide
It's said for each lie there's absolute truth
It's written that love cancels out each hate
From our birth to the end of our youth
Others often control the path of our fate
But when adulthood's doorstep is crossed
That's when we all must own our choices
Some like watching as their fate is tossed
Others chose to march to the inner voices
You, I've never or will ever, understand
You were given more than most could dream
You picked the path of a selfish cowardly man
Your life, your needs, your only life scheme
Your path and mine aren't compatible, no sir
I cannot abide the pain or hurt any further
So with heavy, yet lighten heart, I will defer
Choosing to walk with freedom from your clutter
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dvtpdw
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2013-06-24 14:14:18]
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Re: Freedom From Clutter
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 05:32:45 PM AEST
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Yes it's sad when family are forced to have a need just to brake away and run like hell. It's always the pure at heart that get hurt by those whom are out there for only what they can gain. Yet those of us mare mortals that pluck up the courage to stand up and say enough is enough. To them I say well done, you take yourself seriously and therefore others should do the same. Sad story though.
The poem it self very very good write. It flows like water. Rhymes well and makes no bones about what's on your heart.
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Re: Freedom From Clutter
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 08:11:22 PM AEST
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I have read your poems on this topic before and I respect that you have taken responsibility where your daughter failed.
The difficult thing for me to think about is the affect of her abandonment on him. :( So very sad.
But your poetry is always right on the money and here is no exception.
Best wishes,
Tim |
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Re: Freedom From Clutter
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by Astronoe on
Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 09:35:24 PM AEST
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| Nicely written. Plain in meaning but pretty on prose. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Freedom From Clutter
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by shelby on
Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 11:25:27 PM AEST
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The poem is perfectly crafted.
It also lets us all feel each emotion and your heart.
It is so sad, blessings to you and the grandson.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Freedom From Clutter
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 08:10:20 PM AEST
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!?how can a parent walk away?!
this is so powerful heartfelt and a beautiful thing
you have done keeping your grandson, kids
know who butters their bread, i know he loves
you to pieces too!
hugs n' love nessa |
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