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Damned
Contributed by
raspberry89
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Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 11:24:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Here comes the devil, breathing down my neck.
He makes life hard and he makes me sweat.
Taunts me all day, tortures me all night.
I can't live like this, I hate life.
I could be happy and I would smile.
If he'd just let me breathe, just for a little while.
But he wont, he'd rather just tear me apart.
Some creatures don't have hearts.
Happiness and love are now missing.
And if you be quiet you'll notice he's listening.
I've seen the devil and I believe
I was damned on the day I was conceived.
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raspberry89
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2013-06-24 11:24:53]
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Re: Damned
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by dvtpdw on
Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 02:03:08 PM AEST
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| So much pain within your words. Although I can very sadly relate, I hope for you that happiness finds your path. Your words create such imagery and heartache. Hang in there; it does get better. Great write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: Damned
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by shelby on
Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 11:28:09 PM AEST
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Heart breaking write here.I am so sorry.I feel the depth of the pain near your heart.
The devil enjoys messing with our emotions and our lives. There is always light, and good does overcome evil anyday, it is a matter of reaching and asking for that light.....
Hugs you tight and tighter,reach you will be fine!!
Michelle |
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