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unchanged
Contributed by
phantomvampyress
on
Friday, 21st June 2013 @ 03:19:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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leave again
another faultering mistake
my own cross I bare
laying in the emptiness where I have no fear
was never enough for one to keep
so take on this flight of my own inner despair
wallowing in whatever may come
drowing in the boiling rain
I still remain .... Unchanged.....
vampyress Jenni
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2013-06-21 15:19:58]
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Re: unchanged
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 23rd June 2013 @ 10:26:10 AM AEST
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wallowing in whatever
I like that line...
good flow. |
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Re: unchanged
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by Survivor on
Thursday, 18th July 2013 @ 05:45:39 AM AEST
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| A nice free verve that you have written very well to express yourself, and the metaphors were great as well. Change can occur if you keep fighting; hang in there. |
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Re: unchanged
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 02:11:48 PM AEST
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| beautifully heartfelt, hugs n' love nessa |
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