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take the chance
Contributed by
phantomvampyress
on
Friday, 21st June 2013 @ 03:14:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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strong but yet weak
don't be foolish
you have it right there take your opportunity
while it stands
shes an angel in disguise
feelings can't be denied
she is willing to be yours
she left the open door
don't let her fly away
bitterness will turn to memories forgotten
demons will be released
she has the answers she will help you through all things
a special bond is shared
that comes close to never
take her as she stands ready for you
don't be like the masses who want to kick their own asses (later)
Shes here and then she's gone so take her while she stands for you..
Vampyress jenni
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Re: take the chance
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 22nd June 2013 @ 10:22:44 PM AEST
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Hey :)
It's lovely to see how much you have grown over the years. This poem proves it, it's much deeper than the older stuff that I remember.
Nice to see you posting :)
Phyllis x |
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Re: take the chance
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 02:16:19 PM AEST
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bitterness will turn to memories forgotten
truly an indepth beautiful line, this is heartfelt and
flows gently across the page,
hugs n' love nessa |
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