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I wanted to dance in the rain
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 04:02:47 AM in AEST
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I remember not long ago,
I used to be the desert rose
wandering around a hot dry desert
hot sand burning between my toes.
I longed for the rain to come
a cleansing for my thirst.
If per chance the sky would burst
off to dance in the rain Id go.
Now I live where the rain is plenty.
I saw the clouds tonight.
Then they burst and Heavens opened
I thought for moments, dance in the rain, just because?
Living in the city, it may be a sight
so instead I sat and watched the drops
never once leaving the front step.
But as the puddles pooled,
and the tempest beat like a drum.
It evoked the raindancer I once was
I wanted to dance in the rain just because...
There will be another night
for the rains are always here
maybe a city raindancer?
I wanted to dance in the rain.
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shelby
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2013-06-19 04:02:47]
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Re: I wanted to dance in the rain
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 01:04:23 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful write.. you always write so beautifully though!! keep on writing.. glad to see you writing!!
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Re: I wanted to dance in the rain
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 02:32:39 PM AEST
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funny my friend I just wrote a poem about dancing in the rain....go for it I would
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Re: I wanted to dance in the rain
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by emystar on
Thursday, 20th June 2013 @ 01:20:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful, girl friend.
You would probably have others dancing with you but then there are spoil sports that don't know how to have fun.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: I wanted to dance in the rain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st June 2013 @ 01:17:18 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, absolutely love it. I could image you being the rain dancer too. |
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