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Crystal Streams
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 10:24:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Live in your dreams,
And swim in the Crystal streams,
Of your imagination,
Hidden from the poison,
Of the awakened,
And forsakened.
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lonelywolf04
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2013-06-16 22:24:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Crystal Streams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wordsmith123 on
Monday, 17th June 2013 @ 03:08:59 AM AEST (User
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"Hidden from the poison of the awakened..." An interesting and almost cynical take on so-called "knowledge," and percieved "understanding." Very thought provoking.
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Re: Crystal Streams
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 12:15:57 AM AEST (User
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Short poem but it fills the entire page.Nicely done, it is thought provoking.
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