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I Love The Smile In Your Eyes....
Contributed by
RussellReinhardt
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Saturday, 15th June 2013 @ 05:17:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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06:06:2013....
I love the smile in your eyes.
For me that's first prize.
I remember the days when you were sad.
Boy that use to make me mad.
That someone so precious.
Should have pain so endless.
Now there's a new love in your life.
I hope one day he will make you his wife.
For he has dried your tears.
Driven away you fears.
Broken down the walls.
That takes a man with balls.
I'm so happy for you both.
Please let me know when you take the oath.
RR
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RussellReinhardt
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2013-06-15 17:17:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Love The Smile In Your Eyes....
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 15th June 2013 @ 10:55:56 PM AEST (User
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this is such a happy smile worthy write.I know they will love it.Im also happy to hear this news even though I dont know her. Blessing to her and her new life:) No woman deserves to be abused and treated badly.
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Re: I Love The Smile In Your Eyes....
(User Rating: 1 ) by GloomyBlu on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 08:27:35 AM AEST (User
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the rhyme felt a bit forced, but the message still shone through. |
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Re: I Love The Smile In Your Eyes....
(User Rating: 1 ) by karu on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 10:52:30 AM AEST (User
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superb title
and very sweet way of writing |
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Re: I Love The Smile In Your Eyes....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wide_eyed on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 06:20:45 PM AEST (User
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Aw, so sweet of you to write this. |
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