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Feeble Souls
Contributed by
flex4life13
on
Thursday, 13th June 2013 @ 08:47:45 AM in AEST
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Plausible, fallacious fiction
lusty,feisty diction
near a box car window, you often appear
lay your hand on the gleaming silhouette, west of fear.
north of us, cities deep in slumber
resting ideas they've yet to encounter.
Faintly from the the east, muffled cries, feeble souls.
South of us, yet to be uncovered tracks, chills from the cold.
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2013-06-13 08:47:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Feeble Souls
(User Rating: 1 ) by GloomyBlu on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 08:29:39 AM AEST (User
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i dig the directional wordplay. |
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