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Dimly Lit Stars
Contributed by
freckle
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Monday, 10th June 2013 @ 06:10:12 PM in AEST
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Glassy eyed girls dream with crimson tears
Through dark of night, with stars not bright, but dimly hanging
So not to outshine, the tears
The girls, they come, like a harem
So many, so different, so alike
All hearts break hard
He sits upon his white throne
Dark hair pristine, back straight, poised
A slow smirk, a wide grin spreads
They are his, no matter the day, no matter the night
The hearts he held, he drained each ounce
With wine and cheese and chocolate too
The perfection played until the end, so masterfully
He checks himself in the mirror, so handsomely
He wielded their love around and ripped it from their souls
Glassy eyed girls dream with crimson tears
Through dark of night, with stars not bright, but dimly hanging
So not to outshine, the tears
Carol Hunter 2013
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Re: Dimly Lit Stars
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by dvtpdw on
Monday, 10th June 2013 @ 07:54:15 PM AEST
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| Your wrods carry a hopeless drum, a sadness that must be met to be seen. They take the reader to a heavy laden path, and show a scene unseen. Great write. thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: Dimly Lit Stars
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th June 2013 @ 08:52:27 PM AEST
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Very deep.
Great job.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Dimly Lit Stars
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 05:23:36 PM AEST
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exquisite! beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Dimly Lit Stars
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th January 2015 @ 07:31:04 PM AEST
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| I really like this. But, trust me, life is a circle. That dark-haired, slow-smirking grin will fall to the same crimson tears. And the wine, the cheese and the chocolate will, one day, drained him just the same. |
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