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Pot, Vodka or House Wine
Contributed by
cherryamber
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Saturday, 8th June 2013 @ 05:16:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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thats why I need something else, you know
cause my insides don’t do a good enough job of filling
the hole. All the world’s blood in a single transfusion
wouldn’t be enough to quieten down the entity that
screams inside me
If only those hours in solitude could pay your debts
They wouldnt believe me if I spoke about it
anyway - the constant feeling as though you’ve done
wrong
As if your presence is enough alone for all the
world’s goodness to be overthrown. and thats why I
need something else? You know. Like pot, vodka or
house wine. Anything that gives me the option of
death or being so wasted you feel dead
That hole in your stomach that can’t be filled with the
mundane of life. All the love, the blood of everyone out
there, would not even filter through a single
particle
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2013-06-08 05:16:27]
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Re: Pot, Vodka or House Wine
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by scentless_flower on
Saturday, 8th June 2013 @ 03:01:55 PM AEST
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the simplest words can reveal the deepest things.
this is why i love poetry, this is why i think this is beautiful :) |
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Re: Pot, Vodka or House Wine
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th June 2013 @ 12:29:12 AM AEST
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went, spent, along the way regurgitating it --- " all the love, the blood of everyone out there, would not even filter through a single particle" I think this is quite naturally getting at the truth which seems impossible to actually state. It's very good poetry, for lack of a better name.
There's a rational coherent reality behind it. I like it a lot.
I was struck by the title, and then it sort of mixed like a good elixir always should. Keep up the great writing!
Peace!
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