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Whispers in a Crowd
Contributed by
TheeCductress
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Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I didn't want to leave you,
But I knew I couldn't stay,
The nurses were emotional,
There was nothing they could say,
In the crowd I heard a whisper,
I can't believe he's gone,
He's only fifty-two I thought,
And all because of VietNam,
The tears just kept on flowing,
As sister tried climbing in your bed,
Again I heard a whisper,
I can't believe he's dead,
I know there's no more suffering,
I know there's no more pain,
So I'll hold your memories dear to heart,
Until we meet again.
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TheeCductress
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2003-05-15 22:35:00]
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Re: Whispers in a Crowd
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 01:33:00 AM AEST
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This is truly beautiful..tho so sad... my heart goes out to you...... keep up the great work....
Jenni |
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Re: Whispers in a Crowd
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by TheeCductress on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 09:41:15 AM AEST
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| Thank you for your kind words. I am sorry to hear about your parents. There is nothing more difficult in life than to have neither parent to lean on. Stay Strong, Alicia |
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Re: Whispers in a Crowd
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 01:15:21 AM AEST
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| yes...absolutely beautiful...wonderful write...I'm sorry it had to be about someone so close to home for you... |
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