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An orchard
Contributed by
flex4life13
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Thursday, 6th June 2013 @ 06:22:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The orchard of mindfulness
An array of peaceful dwellings
Congruent fields of emptiness
There reside tranquil luminescent underpinnings
Racing hearts throbbing veins
Without you a sailor lost at sea
Pacing towards a demise, as I feign
A half-lit smile, without you I cannot see.
A room, a distant gleam beyond my scope
Lovely pedestal you rest upon
Lofty scrutiny entitles us one last hope
In eluding the spell you have spawned.
Twenty four hours of condensation atop my view
A scar to match every drop of dew.
Hinder not my disposition, crimson rapture wont you shine through
Devoid are your inhibitions, countering bouts yet begin as if anew.
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flex4life13
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2013-06-06 18:22:59]
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Re: An orchard
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 7th June 2013 @ 12:00:00 AM AEST
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I can't quite make much out of this, at least in my first reading, but I'll have to go over it.
I must say though, the wording and flow are well done, and pleasant too. |
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Re: An orchard
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th May 2014 @ 11:37:46 PM AEST
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beautifully vivid imagery, gentle hints of romance
and so gracefully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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