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Soul of Beauty
Contributed by
NightMareShoGun
on
Sunday, 2nd June 2013 @ 08:08:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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If beauty were time, you'd be eternity. you will shine my light everday keep my eyes bright keep my heart strong and most of all you keep my soul scared in your heart
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Re: Soul of Beauty
(User Rating: 1 ) by VRR on
Wednesday, 5th June 2013 @ 01:50:01 AM AEST (User
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This can be a good dedication sentences, not a poem. This isn't poetry. You have writen nice ones too but this isnt it. Better one's next time.
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