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Note To Self
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Sunday, 2nd June 2013 @ 02:00:17 PM in AEST
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Oh stupid man who never doubts
Do you recall what life's about?
Do you recall what life should be?
You always look but never see
You always take but think you give
and know just how they all should live
While deep inside you're weak and frail
and doom the ones you love to fail
Oh stupid man, so self assured
You've listened well but never heard
You turn your head and try to find
the answers, though you've closed your mind
to tears and hurt and think you're strong...
the awful truth is you are wrong
You're sad and sick and dumb and fake
and leave destruction in your wake
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
... [
2013-06-02 14:00:17]
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Re: Note To Self
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 2nd June 2013 @ 07:50:48 PM AEST
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wow this is an amazing write.. very philosophical and speaks from within.. very well written poem from you as always
great job
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Re: Note To Self
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by Spike on
Friday, 14th June 2013 @ 06:16:00 PM AEST
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Larry,
Well written -meter, rhyme, rhythm, tone, subject matter. A note to self as much as a diatribe regarding another.
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Re: Note To Self
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 04:17:08 AM AEST
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Very well put. Says it as it is and reads well. Grate write
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Note To Self
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 07:12:39 PM AEST
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beautifully well woven words, knowing you i believe your being too hard on yourself for your poetry is held by a beautiful caring soul, once again here; truly heartfelt,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Note To Self
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 23rd March 2019 @ 12:26:52 AM AEST
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Dude, lighten up on yourself. I love the poem. Love it, but the emotions that spawned it are injurious. I know. I have been there. Still am at times, but lesser now.
Thank you.
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