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Evaluation
Contributed by
Wordsmith123
on
Saturday, 1st June 2013 @ 11:27:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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Knowledge, held captive in times gone by,
Evades recollection as thoughts go awry.
That which now should be well-known,
Instead is lost as brain cells groan.
When ink and paper fiercely clash,
I pray the outcome's all but rash:
A mark which stains with deepest red,
Must, in the end, be left unsaid.
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2013-06-01 23:27:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Evaluation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd June 2013 @ 11:36:42 AM AEST (User
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Very well said. I like the sound and style of this poem as well as its meaning. KUDOS on a great write. |
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