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Corrosion
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Saturday, 1st June 2013 @ 11:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Emotional torture drips
and
burns a hole in my soul,
in corrosion love decays
leaving me crippled
as
I mentally melt
and silently flow into the void.
In this burning confusion
My hands of clay are useless
and I
don't know what to do,
Into depression I fall
as the demons feed in a frenzy
and
all I can do is laugh manically.
No compassion will be found
no one hears my silent screams
resistance is futile now
because
the corrosion's to deep,
depression drips into my mind
as lost love once again starts to haunt
I crack
and melt mentally.
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unknown_utopia
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2013-06-01 23:22:40]
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Re: Corrosion
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by MickyTwo1984 on
Sunday, 2nd June 2013 @ 07:42:58 AM AEST
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Re: Corrosion
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th June 2013 @ 09:25:33 PM AEST
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I'm still catching up.
so sad but beautifuly written. |
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Re: Corrosion
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 11:02:11 PM AEST
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the pain just radiates from this write, every line is so
moving, so full of feeling and emotions run amok and
transfer to the reader, i felt the 'crack' at the
end........... then the 'melting' left me momentarily
speechless, truly a brilliant piece,
hugs n' love nessa |
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