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Hate
Contributed by
tammyrobbins
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Wednesday, 29th May 2013 @ 10:49:22 PM in AEST
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It keeps me warm
Though it is a soul’s
Consuming life storm
Controlling choice and action
To illicit
A particular response
Desired reaction
The thoughts of revenge
Quicken my blood
Perhaps only by myself
Clearly understood
Prompted by pseudo murder in dreams
Forced to rise from my bed
Visions of death
Dance wildly in my head
Hate
It keeps me warm
These embers of emotion
Burning
Glowing red and orange
Radiate from a heart
Rendered cold and torn
I am the billows
With searing burning words
Fanning the flames
Until what I despise
Shall be no more
Hate
It keeps me warm
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Re: Hate
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by MickyTwo1984 on
Thursday, 30th May 2013 @ 07:42:02 AM AEST
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Re: Hate
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by Wordsmith123 on
Thursday, 30th May 2013 @ 06:21:53 PM AEST
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| Something very visceral about this poem. Comparing yourself to the billows fanning the flame is clever. |
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