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Paper
Contributed by
Raindropwings
on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You're so sadly two-dimensional.
So obsessively one-minded.
Two dimensions paper thin.
You are like paper to me.
You are not very strong
You are not very alive
You are a blank
Silent
Piece of paper.
I am a two-dimensional writer.
I don't know how not
To make poetry
Of paper.
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Raindropwings
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2003-05-15 18:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Paper
(User Rating: 1 ) by speed-of-sound on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 07:39:43 AM AEST (User
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interesting. i like the way you used 'two-dimensions'. it's different to other poems i've read... but definitely in a good way! it's not very often you find really original poems.
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