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Loves Cruel Lie
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 05:00:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Loves cruel lie killed me
now I am ghost...
I no longer dream
I barely talk
I just drift off balanced
confused and dazed,
Silently I scream
as I feel myself
Mentally melting
and fading away.
It was never clear
why I lost someone so dear
and when I try to understand why
the thoughts about it keep me awake
and
only intensify the pain,
A strobe light pulsates in my mind
as the emotional torture flows once again.
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unknown_utopia
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2013-05-26 05:00:42]
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Re: Loves Cruel Lie
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by Sasha on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 10:26:38 AM AEST
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| A very poignant write... very well written. |
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Re: Loves Cruel Lie
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 10:36:44 AM AEST
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Alright dear that's enuff of the emotions over load. You gotta get up out of the funk.
Good flows as always.
Luv ya,
emy
And for goodness sake ya gotta quit cheating on me.
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Re: Loves Cruel Lie
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by Sommer on
Monday, 27th May 2013 @ 12:29:39 AM AEST
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| Very relatable. This is a very good way to describe the feelings. Great read. |
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Re: Loves Cruel Lie
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th May 2014 @ 11:51:20 AM AEST
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sad and beautiful in expression, so heartfelt it
touches my own...
hugs n' love nessa |
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